Cracked and Crushed by Gabbi

a pair of friends, a secret starts to unravel
unknown to the other, i am about to crack from the pressure
the other isn't too observing of the way i feel
or has she noticed?
both like the same man -- only one can win his heart
Cracked is the way i feel
All i know is, i'm getting a crushed feeling
crushed like when the surf crashed over the reef
i am a surfboard that got snapped in half
with many pieces afloat, i am feeling the bitterness
that is why i am the cracked and crushed woman

((i entered this in a contest, and it placed as a semi-finalist and got published in a book)

wow, it's good very descriptive.

thank you.

very descriptive... way to let your emotions out *i feel your pain*

thank you, baby. *laughs* i listened to you... let out all the emotions.